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If recollecting were forgetting!

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Version 1
Oh if remembering were forgetting -
Then I remember not!
And if forgetting - recollecting -
How near I had forgot!
And if to miss - were merry -
And to mourn were gay,
How very blithe the maiden
Who gathered these today!

Version 2
If recollecting were forgetting,
Then I remember not,
And if forgetting, recollecting,
How near I had forgot,
And if to miss, were merry,
And to mourn, were gay,
How very blithe the fingers
That gathered this, today!

Version 3
If recollecting were forgetting,
Then I remember not.
And if forgetting, recollecting,
How near I had forgot.
And if to miss, were merry,
And to mourn, were gay,
How very blithe the fingers
That gathered this, Today!

ще търся разликата! Сега виждам само някои различни думички още в началото на първия стих, но не разбирам. ))) Хубав ден!

Who gathered these today!
That gathered this, Today!

+ a lot of comas :)))))))))))))))))))))

аз не разбирам добре езика, от детайла пък съвсем - виж, ако е сурово преведено, да го украся, да го римувам, да направя разни джувки, финтифлюшки

Добре, ще те викам за украсата! ;)